WHAT IM TRYING TO SAY IS: It’s super good, my criticism is that the flashes of black and white just seem corny, and the office -> woman screaming part doesn’t seem very fluid but overall its great okay.

math-metal-is-delicious asked: WHAT IM TRYING TO SAY IS: It's super good, my criticism is that the flashes of black and white just seem corny, and the office -> woman screaming part doesn't seem very fluid but overall its great okay.

Dude I totally agree. There are a couple choppy parts (like the “he could be a chainsaw murderer” part) and tried a million different ways to present it better, but that’s just what came out. Overall I’m pretty happy with it, but I might go back and try to fix those sections.

Thanks for actually giving feedback and not just saying, “it was good bro.” I can always count on you for that ^^

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27th Oct 2012

math-metal-is-delicious asked: WHAT IM TRYING TO SAY IS: It's super good, my criticism is that the flashes of black and white just seem corny, and the office -> woman screaming part doesn't seem very fluid but overall its great okay.